You mean that you would have liked if there where more focus in the head or that it should have turned the head more?? But thank you very much! In my own opinion I like the bokeh effect, caused by the low aperture, which adds drama to the photo.
I like to think so...lol...been shooting for over 17 yrs...but all self-taught...so my opinion isn't expert or anything...just what I like...and your work is great! I usually don't give critiques, because I'm always worried people would take it wrong...and want to be encouraging...So keep it up!